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For every art I make this month I would like you guys to critique my stuff so I can get better!
Be direct, be MEAN. Give me your worst. I have a cast iron stomach for critique!
Notes: - It will be several weeks between your comments and any improvements as I wait 3 weeks between posting and completion because patreon. - If possible keep your critique contained to this specific piece. I have already been thoroughly informed of general mistakes I do ^^
IT NEEDS TO BE SLOPPIER!!! MORE CUM!!! ... sorry i really like this and it's hard to be critical of something that already hits most of the bells and such, and tho i like to doodle occasionally i'm not much of an artist so i don't got an angle there either. maybe a more detailed nose? sweat? idk man
An actual nose could be added? By that i mean like nostrils and stuff. Instead of just shading over it with the plain black color? Not sure if it'd fit the artstyle admittedly but it was my first thought, even if nose/nostrils arent gunna make it look hotter.
Idk man I'm looking for anything to critique here.
zephesh said: An actual nose could be added? By that i mean like nostrils and stuff. Instead of just shading over it with the plain black color? Not sure if it'd fit the artstyle admittedly but it was my first thought, even if nose/nostrils arent gunna make it look hotter.
Idk man I'm looking for anything to critique here.
sussyballs3d said: maybe a more detailed nose? sweat? idk man
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Jarlium
MemberHey lads. Jarlium here.
So this is the: MONTH OF BRUTAL CRITICISM!
For every art I make this month I would like you guys to critique my stuff so I can get better!
Be direct, be MEAN. Give me your worst. I have a cast iron stomach for critique!
Notes:
- It will be several weeks between your comments and any improvements as I wait 3 weeks between posting and completion because patreon.
- If possible keep your critique contained to this specific piece. I have already been thoroughly informed of general mistakes I do ^^
SussyBalls3D
MemberIT NEEDS TO BE SLOPPIER!!! MORE CUM!!!
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sorry i really like this and it's hard to be critical of something that already hits most of the bells and such, and tho i like to doodle occasionally i'm not much of an artist so i don't got an angle there either. maybe a more detailed nose? sweat? idk man
Kyleet
MemberMore shine on the teeth
Ashpaws
MemberI don't care what you say... Every guy would if they could.
Doug Miles
MemberThe way you drew the hand makes it look like a sheath... Said it as you wanted, are you happy now?
Wait... Is that a hand?
Jarlium
MemberGood point. Usually I do tend to do that but it seems like I completely forgot here!
Zephesh
MemberAn actual nose could be added? By that i mean like nostrils and stuff. Instead of just shading over it with the plain black color? Not sure if it'd fit the artstyle admittedly but it was my first thought, even if nose/nostrils arent gunna make it look hotter.
Idk man I'm looking for anything to critique here.
Jarlium
MemberIt is a Lucario.
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