that is QUITE a tiny orc

Christ almighty dude, keep your speech bubbles in the panel they're meant to go to, not in some random one in a place that fucks up the hierarchy of your other bubbles. If they don't fit and have to break the borders a bit, make it a bit, not majorly in another panel with a limp ass line that doesn't even connect to the panel it's meant to go to.
As it is, here's how it's reading.
"What the, I'm turning into my orc girl?"
"I know, but I don't have pockets!"
"So what, girl, do you agree?"
"It's okay girl, you can pay another way"
"Damn, I feel so horny!"
"Yeah..."
"Oh hey, you have to pay 3 coins to go down this path"

The rest reads more or less fine.
but seriously, you've got some hella "Don't dead, open inside" in this shit.

thisplacesucks said:
that is QUITE a tiny orc

automatic negative 2 in str for that orc