Read the description and noticed you were pretty new to ws. Much better fluid dynamics! Huge improvements on this one, excited to see where you go from here. Also less mustard yellow. Folks tend to like a soft yellow/barely yellow color or clear (though I prefer the former myself) and fluid dynamics make a huge impact on the quality of ws art. If it’s got the viscosity of cum or just looks like a long yellow rectangle instead of an actual stream, it’s unnatural and unappealing. Instead, if the flow has droplets flecking off, doesn’t look completely stuck together in ropey globs like cum and instead flows like water (splitting into multiple streams when makes sense too) that hits much better for pee art. Hope my advice wasn’t overstepping, I really like the changes you made for this one so I wanted to cheer you on and give some tips to keep in mind from someone who has been looking at ws stuff a long time. Have a great day!

dsgokori said:
Read the description and noticed you were pretty new to ws. Much better fluid dynamics! Huge improvements on this one, excited to see where you go from here. Also less mustard yellow. Folks tend to like a soft yellow/barely yellow color or clear (though I prefer the former myself) and fluid dynamics make a huge impact on the quality of ws art. If it’s got the viscosity of cum or just looks like a long yellow rectangle instead of an actual stream, it’s unnatural and unappealing. Instead, if the flow has droplets flecking off, doesn’t look completely stuck together in ropey globs like cum and instead flows like water (splitting into multiple streams when makes sense too) that hits much better for pee art. Hope my advice wasn’t overstepping, I really like the changes you made for this one so I wanted to cheer you on and give some tips to keep in mind from someone who has been looking at ws stuff a long time. Have a great day!

Hey, thanks for the feedback!
It's kinda hard to read tho as a block of text.
I'm still experimenting around to find a good way to portrait it, so it's mostly trial and error.

I plan to do more in the future, but for now most WS Art is simply made whenever i got time for it.
Not really only doing WS Art since i want to have some variety going on and also try a lot of new things as an artist :3
Trying to go more into detail with it once i got some more free time and are done with some commissions for people.

Hopefully i can get more financially independend on the future, so i can focus more on some projects i have in mind for a long time and also spend more time on testing stuff on individual pieces more often to try and improve with my coloring and lineart aswell :)

THAT'S MY FRIEND WOOOOH

He is a great artist I want to see him grow *blushes*

I have nothing else to say it's all bye >~<