this felt rushed like the build up lead to this being hotter and more innocently cute but now just kinda rushed into everything at once like the first few panels felt nice until the last 3. maybe its just me and i dont want to sound like some pissed off critic (Still love this btw) but this page felt like it could have built up to maybe 2 maybe 4 more pages before the money shot cause the bj scene was nicely paned out (funny too) but leading to this the sex it just feels like the artist either just got bored or didnt have anything else to add so just wrapped it up. but i do hope im wrong and there is more.

moonwolfriki said:
this felt rushed like the build up lead to this being hotter and more innocently cute but now just kinda rushed into everything at once like the first few panels felt nice until the last 3. maybe its just me and i dont want to sound like some pissed off critic (Still love this btw) but this page felt like it could have built up to maybe 2 maybe 4 more pages before the money shot cause the bj scene was nicely paned out (funny too) but leading to this the sex it just feels like the artist either just got bored or didnt have anything else to add so just wrapped it up. but i do hope im wrong and there is more.

Yeah.
I mean, this is like biologically accurate
But it feels a bit oof.