Finally figured out what was bothering me about the series. In most of these panels the feline's pussy is in the wrong spot. You have it too far to the front, in some spots the opening is parallel to their navel. The last panel on this page in particular highlights the issue. If you were to rotate the last panel 90° clockwise and adjust the internal shot and speech bubble to remain as they are the picture might make more sense.

Love the concept though! <3

milesshowers said:
Finally figured out what was bothering me about the series. In most of these panels the feline's pussy is in the wrong spot. You have it too far to the front, in some spots the opening is parallel to their navel. The last panel on this page in particular highlights the issue. If you were to rotate the last panel 90° clockwise and adjust the internal shot and speech bubble to remain as they are the picture might make more sense.

Love the concept though! <3

i commissioned it, rather than drawing it myself, and i didnt notice any problems till you mentioned it, so im not gonna ask muhny to change it

This is probably me new favorite comic and picture

thatonepersonoof said:
This is probably me new favorite comic and picture

thank you, i dont get much unbirth, cause i tend to prefer oral vore and anal vore, but when i had this idea, i knew it had to be made

milesshowers said:
In most of these panels the feline's pussy is in the wrong spot.

INHALE...AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH