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  • So it might just be me but it feels like this story is moving incredibly fast and with not nearly as many missteps/ funny shenanigans from species difference that I think would reasonably be there, so its left me a bit confused, like how much exactly was she able to parse from being 'mind melded' with Oliver? Did she learn how to do this anatomy from it or was it the magazines? Don't get me wrong this is a very lovely comic and I love it to bits I just feel like maybe a little verbal communication and experimentation would have cleared stuff up.

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  • fruit said:
    So it might just be me but it feels like this story is moving incredibly fast and with not nearly as many missteps/ funny shenanigans from species difference that I think would reasonably be there, so its left me a bit confused, like how much exactly was she able to parse from being 'mind melded' with Oliver? Did she learn how to do this anatomy from it or was it the magazines? Don't get me wrong this is a very lovely comic and I love it to bits I just feel like maybe a little verbal communication and experimentation would have cleared stuff up.

    Hey I respect your thoughts and feelings on this. I know there's always room for improvement, and opportunity for setups and things.

    I only know how to tell a story the way I would want to see it. I'm more about the little moments, symbolism, and feeling then I am about logical setups and deeper explanations. Just how I am. <:)

    Still, thanks for giving your thoughts and time. Appreciate you. <3

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  • shanefrost said:
    Hey I respect your thoughts and feelings on this. I know there's always room for improvement, and opportunity for setups and things.

    I only know how to tell a story the way I would want to see it. I'm more about the little moments, symbolism, and feeling then I am about logical setups and deeper explanations. Just how I am. <:)

    Still, thanks for giving your thoughts and time. Appreciate you. <3

    A well said answer, thanks for the reply. Makes alot of sense and the method works well for you.

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