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If you want to support me you can do that here https://www.patreon.com/Dzat

Those who do will also gain access to animations one month early, here is a preview of the newest animation currently on my patreon. https://files.catbox.moe/6iatok.webm

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  • My thoughts on this.

    + for great model
    + for sexy concept
    + for full insertion

    - for overall length (the buildup was a little long)
    - for not doing a close up of that full insertion (I think it would have been a lot hotter)
    - those weird hip motions towards the end (almost looked painful?)

    Overall I think this was really well done. All the nitpicking is only that; me just saying what I personally thought could have been better. Please don't take it personal. I really liked this, and hope to see more in the future.

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  • AnOrdinaryLamp said:
    Both artists are amazing in their own right

    But critterclaws always block extra angles ALWAYS.
    so I don't like an artist that do this.

    But this guy shows EVERY ANGLE in one video.

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  • Almost wish it was a little longer, and the model animation could be cleaned up a bit (some minor noticeable clipping here and there), but otherwise it's really great.

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  • Well done!
    The wyvern model is incredibly detailed, remarkable work on her scales and textures. I love the artstyle of her. What's more I can tell you have pretty good rigging and animatiing skills. What program did you use to animate this?

    One thing you should consider to improves is her eyelids rigging. There were moments in the animation when we could see the white of her eye above pupil which looked quite unnatural. Usually the upper side of the eye is covered by the eyelid.

    The movement was really smooth and natural to the point I can compare it to Tasuric and KeyFeathers animations.

    I am looking forward to watching new animatiosn from you :)

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  • Absolutely amazing! I love the expressions you've given her and the way her body moves is very well animated! I'd love to see more from you in the future friend!

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  • 1D_Z said:
    That is because it was originally supposed to be that character as I explained here https://twitter.com/1D___Z/status/1162063299569246209
    I just felt that it deviated too much from the original design and didn't tag it as Adine because of that.

    it could very well be her sister but we don't know it's cannon she does has a sister who looks like that and we don't know how her parents like like so her parents and sister could be looking wild as far as we know

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  • Oh god, at around 1:03 her eyes seem to turn by looking back through her head, and I can't unsee it.
    But other than that (and some clipping), this is amazing.

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  • Mdf said:
    Hey hey hey now.
    boop
    No.

    AnOrdinaryLamp said:
    Both artists are amazing in their own right

    Really happy to see this. I get so tired of people being unable to compliment a new talented 3D animator without having to sneak in an insult to one of the others.
    I can certainly enjoy both equally. Very happy to see someone else bring out such quality content!

    Reshiramflys said:
    But critterclaws always block extra angles ALWAYS.
    so I don't like an artist that do this.
    But this guy shows EVERY ANGLE in one video.

    That's strange, I never have the angles blocked out when I view Critter's videos. Oh right I'm a $4 patron. It's a really low price for what you get.
    1d.z will end up doing the same thing if he has the sense. Hear that 1d.z? I got $4 with your name on it! Oh. He already has a patreon and it's... $5?! You extortionist!

    Heh, but really, I wish your patreon page was more clear on what that $5 gives. You wrote it here on this upload, but not on the patreon page itself!

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  • dracosblackwing said:
    My thoughts on this.

    + for great model
    + for sexy concept
    + for full insertion

    - for overall length (the buildup was a little long)
    - for not doing a close up of that full insertion (I think it would have been a lot hotter)
    - those weird hip motions towards the end (almost looked painful?)

    Overall I think this was really well done. All the nitpicking is only that; me just saying what I personally thought could have been better. Please don't take it personal. I really liked this, and hope to see more in the future.

    First of all I would like to say that I liked your comment very much.

    Second comes like yours my personal opinion
    I share the other points but
    +The long buildup made it in my eyes realistical.
    +Also that and those hip movements looks in my eyes like she's really enjoying the toy.
    also what I liked
    +Expressions

    -that she comes before knotting (would've liked to see her coming while or right after knotting)
    -that she is knotting after coming (I would've prefered that she left the knot out after she came in this case or go on afterwards.

    What I also would've loved to see how she gets stuck, moving the toy and/or lifting it up. Stepping on the toy and getting it out with effort and plop while coming again. Stumbling with the sudden movement landing on the back or front exhausted and breathing heavily.

    But even after all that I wouldn't have expected to like a wyvern video this much. Really great work.

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  • mdf said:
    Hey hey hey now.
    boop
    No.

    Actually yes, critter uses patreon to paywall exclusive content that he blurs out for public releases. its a shame, cause he is one of the best animators I have seen. I cannot put into simple text how much I hate patreon, those scammers.

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  • dragonrider42 said:
    Actually yes, critter uses patreon to paywall exclusive content that he blurs out for public releases. its a shame, cause he is one of the best animators I have seen. I cannot put into simple text how much I hate patreon, those scammers.

    Artists being paid minuscule amounts of money for hours of work. Crazy concept, wow.

    You're not being denied animations, you miss out on a single angle per animation, and subbing for a single month allows you to access the entire back-log of content.

    Art is time and talent, time and talent are money, stop whining.

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