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  • tiamat5 said:
    I am just hoping her friend eventually can't take it anymore and comes in to make it a threesome

    I said it on the last page, and I'll say it again here: I really hope not.

    First off, on a personal level, I have that sort of content blacklisted. I like female/female pairings. I don't like two females and a male together. But that's just a personal preference, and isn't that significant.

    What is significant is that it would completely break the characters and flow of the story.

    Wolf-lady here has made it clear early on that she doesn't like dick. She likes, in her own word, "pussy".

    This is also Dee's first time. She's embarrassed enough as it is. Realistically having a second person show up for a threesome would be way too much for her to handle.

    Having the guy show up out of nowhere would make no sense narratively, because how do you justify that? "Oh hey sorry, you have no idea who I am but I was spying on you through a hidden camera, That's okay right? We can bang now?"

    I don't think he's stupid enough to imagine that going well.

    Regardless of it being to my personal tastes or not, I'd be quite annoyed by the incredibly sloppy writing if the comic were to go in that direction.

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  • tiamat5 said:
    Well we really have no control about what is going to happen and it won't be any less or more sloppy than any other similar porn comics.

    Slypon usually has somewhat better writing than you see in most porn comics.

    I understand that you don't like it but other people do.

    There is approximately eight times as many straight comics out there as there are lesbian comics.

    I understand that you like that sort of thing, and that's perfectly fine. But considering there is already such a discrepancy in terms of volume of content, don't you see how it might be a bit grating to some people that every time there's a lesbian comic there's someone in the comments saying "you know this is great and all but you know what would make it better? Dick."

    Plus all the things Dee has submitted to I think by now embarrassment is out the window. And just because the wolf hates dick doesn't mean Dee does. And you can't call her suddenly submitting to a stranger any rock sold flow that would be broken any more adding her friend in would break it.

    I can, and I will. There is a huge difference between Dee deciding she's going to go with the flow, and with lesbian wolf lady being fine with having some guy spy on her, then break into her house swingin' his dick while she's in the middle of sex, and somehow she's perfectly fine with that, despite her stated preference.

    It's the difference between suspension of disbelief and internal inconsistency. It's the same reason that it is easy to get invested in a book that includes magic and dragons, but if the characters start acting inconsistently, people complain.

    I can already see that we're not going to come to an agreement on this though. I'll just say that I'm reasonably confident that Slypon is a good enough writer to not slip up like that.

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  • Clawdragons said:
    Slypon usually has somewhat better writing than you see in most porn comics.

    There is approximately eight times as many straight comics out there as there are lesbian comics.

    I understand that you like that sort of thing, and that's perfectly fine. But considering there is already such a discrepancy in terms of volume of content, don't you see how it might be a bit grating to some people that every time there's a lesbian comic there's someone in the comments saying "you know this is great and all but you know what would make it better? Dick."

    I can, and I will. There is a huge difference between Dee deciding she's going to go with the flow, and with lesbian wolf lady being fine with having some guy spy on her, then break into her house swingin' his dick while she's in the middle of sex, and somehow she's perfectly fine with that, despite her stated preference.

    It's the difference between suspension of disbelief and internal inconsistency. It's the same reason that it is easy to get invested in a book that includes magic and dragons, but if the characters start acting inconsistently, people complain.

    I can already see that we're not going to come to an agreement on this though. I'll just say that I'm reasonably confident that Slypon is a good enough writer to not slip up like that.

    Dee already admitted she never realized she was attracted to women before. Without getting into speculation territory, what's stopping the wolf from realizing the same thing about men? Let's get real: you just don't want this to become an F/F/M comic because of personal preferences.

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  • Counter-the-Courier said:
    Dee already admitted she never realized she was attracted to women before. Without getting into speculation territory, what's stopping the wolf from realizing the same thing about men? Let's get real: you just don't want this to become an F/F/M comic because of personal preferences.

    Well for one, she's a heck of a lot more experienced than Dee is.

    And no, if I thought that it made sense from a narrative perspective for the guy to join in, I wouldn't be as adamantly against it as I am here.

    I also have very little interest in male/male pairings, but I follow a number of male/male comics because I think they have good writing. I care more about a consistent and well-done story than I do about the sex being tailored to my interests.

    So no. Your "let's get real" was followed, ironically, by a product of your own imagination.

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  • Clawdragons said:
    First off, on a personal level, I have that sort of content blacklisted. I like female/female pairings. I don't like two females and a male together. But that's just a personal preference, and isn't that significant.

    Just curious. Are you alright with a guy being a voyeur to f/f?

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  • Sorrowless said:
    Just curious. Are you alright with a guy being a voyeur to f/f?

    Voyeurism isn't really something that interests me much, but I'm fine with it. As I said, if it makes sense narratively (which it does), that's the most important.

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  • Counter-the-Courier said:
    Dee already admitted she never realized she was attracted to women before. Without getting into speculation territory, what's stopping the wolf from realizing the same thing about men? Let's get real: you just don't want this to become an F/F/M comic because of personal preferences.

    The difference is that Dee is completely inexperienced and probably had yet to explore what she's interested until now. The wolf is clearly quite experienced and knows what she likes, shown by her confidence in the situation and how prepared she is (from walking Dee through through the foreplay and sex to having a strap-on ready).

    I have a wide range of interests gender-wise, F/M, F/F, M/M, threesomes of any mix (including F/F/M) and many others, but Clawdragons is right, having the bloke show up and just be readily accepted into the sex would be annoying. It's not so much about who's involved as it is about how much it makes sense. If it fits the story/situation, they could have an all-out orgy for all I care, but in this particular comic, including the male on the other end of the camera in the sex wouldn't fit.

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  • RomanticDisease said:
    What the heck with the stuffed comments...

    Player69 said:
    Oh shit she speaks
    Why are people wriiting essays?

    tl, dr. "so what if he shows up and they all fug"
    "no, that would ruin narrative."
    "but porn."
    "nein"
    "watch?"
    "mayb"

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