http://i1185.photobucket.com/albums/z342/Rondriekus/Violet.png
http://i1185.photobucket.com/albums/z342/Rondriekus/Violet-1.png

First One: Original.
Second: Sat, Contrast manipulations.

Which better? Which should I upload? Critique neither--just kiddin'. I don't care, go for it. -raises eyebrow; senses incoming controversy-

EDIT: I'd prefer open-onions (... I give up...) on the first one since it's the original art. The second is just me diqqing around with IrFanView's functions.

Hmmm. First one cloths, second one skin/hair.

furballs_dc said:
Hmmm. First one cloths, second one skin/hair.

Uh... Take the first one's clothes coloring and combine with the second's skin and hair tones? Yeah I would, but I kinda like both and was just trying to fawk around with the first one on the second. I apologize, but I'm mainly looking for opinions on the first one. OP edit coming.

I vote neither, maybe it's just me but i think those are a little to low for the quality standard.

slyroon said:
I vote neither, maybe it's just me but i think those are a little to low for the quality standard.

http://e621.net/post/show/271465 <----- ... Seriously? You're talking quality?

Get out hater. -.-

UltravioletMoonRay said:
http://e621.net/post/show/271465 <----- ... Seriously? You're talking quality?

Get out hater. -.-

I'm not hating, i just gave my honest opinion.

On another note if have to choose, i would say that the first one looks best.

slyroon said:
I'm not hating, i just gave honest opinion.

On another note if have to choose, i would say that the first one looks best.

Aiight fair enough. Fair enough. Once you said it was an opinion--because a lot of people fail to remember that that's exactly what they're giving--I lost my will to confront you. xD

-walks on pins and needles; exercising caution-

My opinion? Buy this book immediately.

honest opinion? both of those need a loooot of work. It's hard to say which one looks better because the original looks bizarrely colored, and the second one even more so.
I can see you're trying a few things with anatomy, but I feel like you need to check more real life references before you try from guesswork. I could point out a LOT of anatomy mistakes, but rather than trying to mechanically fix that one pose, try and just get a better understanding of the body in general. Contrary to what a lot of people say, tracing and copying is not the worst thing you can do. It can help a lot with just getting used to proportions and linework. Oh, the lines could use smartening up too. they look all fuzzy.

If you're going to make a human a color that obviously isn't human color, make it obvious that's intended, and not the result of a mangled palette. that means having some texture and shading in there.

aaand finally, I'm not sure what you meant by

UltravioletMoonRay said:
http://e621.net/post/show/271465 <----- ... Seriously? You're talking quality?

Get out hater. -.-

because I'd put that at a higher quality than yours. Not saying there's no bad quality pictures on e621, but that isn't one of them, and you can help by not adding MORE of them.

UltravioletMoonRay said:
http://e621.net/post/show/271465 <----- ... Seriously? You're talking quality?

Get out hater. -.-

That is about a billion times better than the shit you posted. Don't post your 'art' on a public forum if you're not ready to receive feedback on it, negative or otherwise.

null0010 said:
My opinion? Buy this book immediately.

I don't draw comics. Next. -->

Fuck the other two faggots below you.

UltravioletMoonRay said:
http://i1185.photobucket.com/albums/z342/Rondriekus/Violet.png
http://i1185.photobucket.com/albums/z342/Rondriekus/Violet-1.png

Neither, you need a LOT of work, try searching for some drawing guides on the interwebs and use those, practice makes perfect and no one fell out of the sky a master.
But you still have a long way ahead of you till you create art and not scrabbles.

UltravioletMoonRay said:
I don't draw comics. Next. -->

The book gives sound advice on everything, especially dynamic poses, shading and the likes, you would benefit from that book nonetheless.

NotMeNotYou said:
Neither, you need a LOT of work, try searching for some drawing guides on the interwebs and use those, practice makes perfect and no one fell out of the sky a master.
But you still have a long way ahead of you till you create art and not scrabbles.

Not valuing this. Next.

Locked for excessive drama.

UltravioletMoonRay said:
Not valuing this. Next.

I'm actually gonna but in here. That is a VERY valid opinion, I would reconsider your disdain for it, your art needs work, it seriously does, I'd take a step back and re-evaluate your style so you may improve.