Hello everyone!
So I wrote my first longer story, with my english gadered from youtube videos and e621.
So I just want to know who good is my writing? Where should I develop? What did I got wrong?
You can read the story here: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/23157009/
It's about a dragon couple who steal from the wrong cave.
Wish you all a wonderful day/night/morning.
Updated by JeffreyDahmer