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Down the Hatch Page 118 - by LemonDeer

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I-I don't think Noah's worried about his feet hurting anymore.

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  • shadow298189 said:
    WTF.....HOW U JUST GONNA KILL THE MAIN CHARACTER LIKE THAT WTF Noah didn't deserve to die like that how the FUCK U GONNA MAKE MORE CHAPTERS WITH A DEAD MAIN CHARACTER?

    Noah is at best a deuteragonist. Mordecai is the primary protagonist.

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  • Bongani said:
    Noah is at best a deuteragonist. Mordecai is the primary protagonist.

    Still why kill the only being keeping the story worth a read Noah dead killed by mordecai. mordecai is seen as a heartless peace of shit pred like most sadly and the story of What happened 2 Noah's sister is thrown out the window like it doesn't matter....WHY no one knows like I said in the post of this next chapter it hurts check that out 2 see what I mean.

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  • Bongani said:
    Noah is at best a deuteragonist. Mordecai is the primary protagonist.

    If anyone's a deuteragonist it probably Mort. Lemon has said she wrote this original from Noah's perspective, and that she didnt even intend to keep Mort around the rest of the story but then got attached and changed it. So they both kinda share the main stage, although obv sometimes more than others.

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  • shadow298189 said:
    I thought Noah was what about his sister and his story I thought mordecai was the side character and they become buddys or something not another heartless peace of shit pred?

    It does feel like a total waste. That long torture in the creature's belly and then to actually get saved from that... and then once we start to wonder what's going to happen, nope just dead.

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  • Late to the party but after seeing these comments I had to say, this is probably the best part of the development. Mordecai and hard vore just kind of works and I love it

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